We have spent some time further developing the script and narrative of the whole experience by trying to write different elements and parts of the script including dialogues for certain characters, what NPCs we can use and also how to start and end certain sections of the narrative while trying to make it all cohesive.
We also continued to delop and refine other scenes based on all of our story ideas such as trying to make the young age scene include a birthday party and show how the mother could be present but not yet needing other characters in the scene by making it before the party begins on that day.
We also wrote down some additional notes and ideas after speaking with our teacher as to how we could refine and improve elements further as a whole narrative.